The first chapter of my first series I hope you like it!
Please tell what you think. Oh and thanks orcarock for the name suggestion!
Chapter 1 The Lower World
Up in the clouds above dreamland the fabled kingdom of Floralia . Floralia is a kingdom filled with plant life. It is inhabited by the people of the sky. Princess Sectonia and her best friend Taranza were on the edge one of the clouds gazing down on the lower world.
Taranza: Sectonia?
Sectonia: yeah?
Taranza: Have you ever wondered that the lower world is like?
Sectonia: All the time! Why do you ask?
Taranza: well Floralia is just 6 islands. Wouldn't it be amazing to see an entire planet!
Sectonia: Let's Do It! * She says as she stands up proudly*
Taranza: D-Do what?
Sectonia: Explore the lower world,Silly!
Taranza: w-we can't we have school and how are we gonna get down and...
Sectonia: I'll be fine,Trust me
Sectonia takes a large seed out of her pocket and throws it down to the lower world.
Taranza: w-whats that?
Sectonia: never mind that! Just meet me here after school!
Sectonia picks up here schoolbag and begins to walk home. Taranza sits there in confusion.
The next day Taranza and Sectonia meet in the same spot after school only to see a giant beanstalk in the way.
Taranza was speechless
Sectonia: come on let's go!
Taranza: OK not even going to mention the GIANT BEANSTALK!
The pair jump down from leaf to leaf on the dreamstalk until they hit the ground.
Sectonia: WOAH! *she says as points to a castle labeled DeDeDe.* Cool let's go inside!
Taranza: No wait!
Sectonia rushes into the castle.
Taranza chases after her.
What awaits the pair in castle DeDeDe?
Find out in the next chapter!
End if chapter 1
Please tell me what you think! Keep in mind this is my first story!